Re: AD review: draft-ietf-kink-kink [section 1-4]

Shoichi Sakane <[email protected]> Wed, 11 May 2005 17:29:08 +0900
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.kink
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> Section 2:
> Cite a reference for DER.

The explanation of "DER" should be droped in the section 2.
Because it is clear for KINK to use it because kerberos use it.

I also think the section 2 should be improved.  It is little verbose.
in particular, about Kerberos things, we should refer to the kerberos
specification.  so I suggest to write the following sentence into the
Introduction.

   It is assumed that the reader is familiar with the terms and concepts
   described in the Kerberos version 5.