Re: AD review: draft-ietf-kink-kink [section 1-4]
Shoichi Sakane <[email protected]> Wed, 11 May 2005 17:29:08 +0900
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> Section 2: > Cite a reference for DER. The explanation of "DER" should be droped in the section 2. Because it is clear for KINK to use it because kerberos use it. I also think the section 2 should be improved. It is little verbose. in particular, about Kerberos things, we should refer to the kerberos specification. so I suggest to write the following sentence into the Introduction. It is assumed that the reader is familiar with the terms and concepts described in the Kerberos version 5.