Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-krb-wg-camellia-cts-02.txt

On 10/01/2012 03:59 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-krb-wg-camellia-cts-02.txt

This revision addresses comments received from IESG review and a couple
from Ken Raeburn.  The changes are all clarity and consistency improvements:

* Reference RFC 3962 for ciphertext stealing.
* Swap key derivation and string-to-key sections to avoid a forward
  reference.
* Consistently use "random-to-key" instead of random2key.
* For key derivation, add a forward reference for random-to-key and a
  reference to RFC 3961 for k-truncate.
* Consistently use K(i) as a subscript to avoid confusion with Ke, Ki,
  etc..
* Explicitly specify the output length of the CMAC for checksums.
* Rename the section title "Kerberos Algorithm Parameters" to
  "Encryption Algorithm Parameters" for better parallelism with the
  checksum parameters section title.
* In the parameters sections, reference the RFC 3961 section the
  parameters are conforming to.
* Explicitly specify a string-to-key parameter format in the
  encryption parameters section.
* Specify default string-to-key parameters in the proper order.
* Removed "editor" role from my author entry.

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