[manet] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-man et-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: (with COMMENT)

Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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NIT
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Some of the text in this cluster of documents is repeated across the documents.
The nits therefore follow some of that duplicated text.

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

Section 1, paragraph 1
>    The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) is defined in [RFC8175].
>    This protocol provides the exchange of link related control
>    information between DLEP peers.  DLEP peers consist of a modem and a
>    router.  DLEP defines a base set of mechanisms as well as support for
>    possible extensions.  This document defines one such extension.

s/This protocol/The protocol/

Document references draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-16, but -17 is
the latest available revision.

Section 1, paragraph 2
> ws may be shared or dedicated on a per flow basis. See [I-D.ietf-manet-dlep-d
>                                    ^^^^^^^^
In this context, "per-flow" forms an adjective and is spelled with a hyphen.



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