[manet] Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-d a-credit-extension-20: (with COMMENT)

Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-20: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 4:  If changes are made to update the Security Consideration sections
of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification and
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control, I recommend this draft reference one
or both of those drafts.

Section 4:  Wildcards are literally mentioned only in the Introduction and
here. I certainly don't mind the recommendation in this section, but should
this be a standalone paragraph?  And should it appear in some/all of the other
drafts in the group?

Section 4, last sentence:  Does this apply to the wildcard topic?  Or something
else, maybe the second sentence?  I think this section could use some
restructuring.



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