[manet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether- credit-extension-08

Reviewer: Carlos Jesús Bernardos
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. These comments were written
primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and
shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments
from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last
Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

The document is well written and I have not found any INTAREA related issues.

Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO
OBJECTION.

The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
with the document:

- “Virtual Area Netwokrs” —> “Virtual Area Networks”.
- “both modens and routers” —> “both modems and routers”.
- “Routers may have limits” —> is this “may” intended to be lowercase or should
it be uppercase? (just checking to be sure). Similar question with “queues
might not be supported”.

Thanks for writing this document.

Carlos



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