[manet] Re: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep- ether-credit-extension-08

Hi Carlos,

Thanks for this review, see below.

On Tue, Feb 4, 2025 at 10:25 AM Carlos Jesús Bernardos via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Reviewer: Carlos Jesús Bernardos
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. These comments were written
> primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and
> shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments
> from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last
> Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
> see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.
>
> The document is well written and I have not found any INTAREA related issues.

Thanks.

> Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO
> OBJECTION.
>
> The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
> with the document:
>
> - “Virtual Area Netwokrs” —> “Virtual Area Networks”.
> - “both modens and routers” —> “both modems and routers”.

Sorry, will fix the above.

> - “Routers may have limits” —> is this “may” intended to be lowercase or should
> it be uppercase? (just checking to be sure). Similar question with “queues
> might not be supported”.

I think lower case is appropriate.

Thanks,
Donald
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> Thanks for writing this document.
>
> Carlos

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