[manet] Gunter Van de Velde's No Objection on draft-ietf-man et-dlep-traffic-classification-13: (with COMMENT)

Gunter Van de Velde has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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# Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-13

# The line numbers used are rendered from IETF idnits tool:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-13.txt

# Many thanks to Darren Dukes for the RTGDIR review follow up.

# Detailed Review
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315                       0   1   2   3   4   5   6   7
316                     +---+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+
317                     |         DSCP          |  MBZ  |
318                     +---+---+---+---+---+---+---+---+
319
320                       DSCP: Differentiated Services Codepoint
321                       MBZ:  MUST be zero

GV> This reads odd. Why the uppercase "MUST" and then all lower case "be zero"
instead of "Be Zero". What most the device do when MBZ happens to be not zero?
Same MBZ observation applies to line402 of the document. What about the
following:

"
DSCP: Differentiated Services Codepoint (RFC 2474).
MBZ: Must Be Zero MUST be set to zero when transmitted. Receivers MUST ignore
this field upon reception. "



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