Re: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-mag-multihoming-04: (with COMMENT)

Thanks, your response resolves all my comments.

Ben.

> On Aug 3, 2017, at 3:30 AM, [email protected] wrote:
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>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Ben Campbell [mailto:[email protected]]
>> Envoyé : jeudi 3 août 2017 00:14
>> À : The IESG
>> Cc : [email protected]; Jouni Korhonen; dmm-
>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]
>> Objet : Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-mag-multihoming-04: (with
>> COMMENT)
>> 
>> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-dmm-mag-multihoming-04: No Objection
>> 
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>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
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>> COMMENT:
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>> 
>> I have a few editorial comments/nits:
>> 
>> - There are several acronyms that should be expanded on first mention.
>> (including at least a couple that are expanded on _second_ mention (MAG and
>> LMA).
>> 
>> - 3.2, "Per-packet management" bullet: The second sentence does not make
>> sense.
>> 
> 
> This sentence will be removed
> 
>> - 3.2, last paragraph: Are we really talking about the latency introduced by per-
>> packet management, or jitter (i.e. variation in latency)?
>> 
> 
> We are talking about jitter. It will be clarified in next release.
> 
>> - 4.1, definition of "Interface Label": This doesn't really define the term "interface
>> label". It talks about how it is used, but not what it represents.
>> 
> 
> You're right... We will add definition of interface label in the terminology section.

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