RE: Begin 2 week WGLC: draft-ietf-rmonmib-raqmon-13.txt

Nit:

After the 4th numbered list item in sect 6, it states:
   security.  Section 7.1 describes the usage of RAQMON with TLS.

I think that should point to sect 6.1 instead of 7.1, right?
That section is title: 6.1.  Usage of TLS with RAQMON

So is it usage of TLS with RAQMON or the other way around?
Pls be consistent.

By the way, sect 2.2.2 also got shuffled quite a bit *or at least,
that is what rfcdiff reports). 
I have not yet checked those changes. Maybe editors can tells us
wether it was just reformatting/moving text of if they also
made any (intentional) changes/additions?

Bert

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Andy Bierman [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Wednesday, June 07, 2006 05:49
> To: RMON WG (E-mail)
> Subject: [RMONMIB] Begin 2 week WGLC: draft-ietf-rmonmib-raqmon-13.txt
> 
> 
> Hi,
> 
> An IESG Security Area review of the RAQMON PDU draft has
> resulted in a new version of that document with improved and
> more detailed security related text and requirements added. 
> 
> RMONMIB WG members are requested to review the RAQMON PDU document:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rmonmib-raqmon-
> pdu-13.txt
> 
> Only the new text related to TLS implementation details (sec. 2.2)
> and security considerations (sec. 6) is under review at this time.
> 
> Please send any comments to the RMONMIB WG mailing list by 
> June 20, 2006.
> 
> thanks,
> Andy
> 
> 
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