RE: Review Period Reminder

[email protected] Tue, 4 May 2004 10:41:02 +0300
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.seamoby
Message-ID <[email protected]>
James,

I had a quick read of:

http://www.geocities.com/kempf42/draft-ietf-seamoby-ctp-09.txt

1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
2) Fix pagination so figures don't cross page boundaries.
3) Stray nroff code in section 5.2 - "in 6"
4) Formating problem with section header 9.2
5) There are references to [IANA] but the document is not listed in the
   references.
6) Section 2, paragraph starting:

     Context transfer protocol messages use Feature Profile Types (FPTs)
     that identify the way that data is organized for the particular
     feature contexts. The FPTs are registered in a number space (with
     IANA Type Numbers) that allows a node to unambiguously determine the
     type of context and the context parameters present in the protocol
     messages.  
  
   You probably want to add a reference to [IANA] there.

Otherwise, I think the document looks like it is good shape.

thanks,
John