RE: Review Period Reminder
[email protected] Tue, 4 May 2004 10:41:02 +0300
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.seamoby |
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| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
James,
I had a quick read of:
http://www.geocities.com/kempf42/draft-ietf-seamoby-ctp-09.txt
1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
2) Fix pagination so figures don't cross page boundaries.
3) Stray nroff code in section 5.2 - "in 6"
4) Formating problem with section header 9.2
5) There are references to [IANA] but the document is not listed in the
references.
6) Section 2, paragraph starting:
Context transfer protocol messages use Feature Profile Types (FPTs)
that identify the way that data is organized for the particular
feature contexts. The FPTs are registered in a number space (with
IANA Type Numbers) that allows a node to unambiguously determine the
type of context and the context parameters present in the protocol
messages.
You probably want to add a reference to [IANA] there.
Otherwise, I think the document looks like it is good shape.
thanks,
John