Re: Review Period Reminder
"James Kempf" <[email protected]> Tue, 4 May 2004 09:40:57 -0700
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.seamoby |
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| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
Hi John,
> 1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
> 2) Fix pagination so figures don't cross page boundaries.
> 3) Stray nroff code in section 5.2 - "in 6"
> 4) Formating problem with section header 9.2
I'll see what I can do. I might need some help with the nroffing. The last
time I did it, nroff inserted maybe 4 or 5 blank lines at the page breaks.
>5) There are references to [IANA] but the document is not listed in the
> references.
OK.
>6) Section 2, paragraph starting:
>
> Context transfer protocol messages use Feature Profile Types (FPTs)
> that identify the way that data is organized for the particular
> feature contexts. The FPTs are registered in a number space (with
> IANA Type Numbers) that allows a node to unambiguously determine the
> type of context and the context parameters present in the protocol
> messages.
>
> You probably want to add a reference to [IANA] there.
OK.
Thanx for looking through it.
jak