Re: Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07

Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07I apologize for this post in advance (lowest added value post to this mailing list in some time), but

http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-editor/instructions2authors.txt

says 

B. Basic Formatting                                        |  3.1
                                                           |
    o   Only printable ASCII characters                    |  3.1(1),
                                                           |    3.1(4)
    o   No lines exceeding 72 characters                   |  3.1(2)
        [This is especially important for "as is" tables   |
         and figures, which cannot be easily reformatted by|
         the RFC Editor.]   

Thanks,

Spencer
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Attila Sipos 
  To: Francois Audet ; Christer Holmberg ; [email protected] 
  Sent: Tuesday, April 07, 2009 2:16 PM
  Subject: Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07


  Francois' comment about the diagram
  also brought to my attention the fact that figure 3
  is probably "illegal" for RFCs - isn't there usually
  an 80 character line-length limit?

  Anyway, I've "re-drawn" figure 3 and removed
  the word "leg" - this can obviously be made
  clear with an explanation.

     UAC           P1               P2               UAS_2     UAS_3    UAS_4
      --- INVITE--->
                    --- INVITE (2) ------------------->
                    --- INVITE ----->
                                     --- INVITE (3) ------------>
                                     --- INVITE (4) --------------------->
                                     <-- 18x (3) ----------------
                    <-- 18x (3) -----
      <-- 18x (3) --
                                     <-- 18x (4) -------------------------
                    <-- 18x (4) -----
      <-- 18x (4) --
                                     <-- 4xx (3) ----------------
                                     --- ACK (3) --------------->
                                     <-- 4xx (4) -------------------------
                                     --- ACK (4) ------------------------>
                    <-- 4xx (3) ----
                    --- ACK (3) --->
      <-- 199 (3) --
      <-- 199 (4) --
                    <-- 200 (2) ----------------------
      <-- 200 (2) --
      --- ACK (2) ->
                    --- ACK (2) --------------------->

  Only issue now is that this makes figure 3 inconsistent with the others.





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  From: [email protected] on behalf of Francois Audet
  Sent: Tue 07/04/2009 18:16
  To: Christer Holmberg; [email protected]
  Subject: Re: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07


  Minor comment: It would improve readability of the Figures if the vertical bars where ]
  included in the pictures.


  ________________________________

          From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
          Sent: Wednesday, April 01, 2009 00:31
          To: [email protected]
          Subject: [Sip] Draft new version: draft-ietf-sip-199-07
         
         


          Hi,

          I have put together a new version (-07) of the 199 draft, based on the latest discussions.

          The changes are in chapters 5 (new note added) and 6 (text simplified). 100rel and SDP o/a impacts have also been added to chapters 5 and 6 (I have still kept chapters 9 and 10, though).

          http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-199-07.txt <http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-199-07.txt> 

          Regards,

          Christer

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