[art] Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipa th-dccp-20
Russ Housley <[email protected]> Wed, 29 Jan 2025 11:39:21 -0500
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Gory: Given the number of places in the document that already have 46 (as opposed to TBD), I do not think it is editorial. Russ > On Jan 29, 2025, at 11:34 AM, Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]> wrote: > > On 27/01/2025 20:16, Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote: >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review result: Almost Ready >> >> I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. Please treat these >> comments just like any other last call comments. >> >> >> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-20 >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review Date: 2025-01-27 >> IETF LC End Date: 2024-10-17 >> IESG Telechat date: 2025-04-03 >> >> Summary: Almost Ready >> >> Thank you for addressing my previous comments. >> >> >> Major Concerns: >> >> Section 3.2.4: Since none of the Key Types is mandatory-to-implement, it >> is possible that two implementations of this specification will not >> interoperate. I realize that the Key Type have very different security >> implications. Also, mandatory-to-implement does not make that Key Type >> mandatory-to-use. Policy has a role too. >> >> Section 8: The IANA registry indicates that Feature Number 10 was given >> a temporary assignment. I expected to see a similar temporary assignment >> for Option Type 46. This document seems to depend on that value being >> assigned by IANA. >> >> >> Minor Concerns: >> >> None. >> >> >> Nits: >> >> Section 3.11.2: Please add white space between the adjacent paragraphs. >> >> Section 8: s/Sect. Section 3.1 specifies/Section 3.1 specifies/ >> >> > Thanks Russ for this review! > > Just one wee update: I think your comment on Section 8 might be only editorial. > The WG has already approved this (in Feb 2024), and IANA ha actioned a provisional assignment in the registry: > https://www.iana.org/assignments/dccp-parameters/dccp-parameters.xhtml#dccp-parameters-7 > > 10 Multipath Capable (TEMPORARY - registered 2024-03-12, expires 2025-03-12) [RFC-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-13 <https://www.iana.org/go/draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-13>] > I expect the only action could be for the I-D ought to be revised to say that "10" is a provisional allocation. > > Best wishes, > > Gorry > > (TSVWG Co-Chair) > > _______________________________________________ art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]