Please clear draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-spec 3
Stephen Nadas <[email protected]> Fri, 2 Oct 2009 10:46:19 -0400
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Hi Jari,
Will the below changes to the figures (analogous to the other not shown here) let you clear this comment?
Thanks,
Steve
Comment text:
In the figures illustrating sample configurations in section 4, it is
not clear which IP address labels denote a host's own IP address vs.
which denote the IP address of the router that a host is using.
Both is currently denoted "IPvX A" in the figure. Suggest
distinguishing the two types of labels more clearly.
Blue is proposed new "text":
+-----------+ +-----------+
| Rtr1 | | Rtr2 |
|(MR VRID=1)| |(BR VRID=1)|
| | | |
VRID=1 +-----------+ +-----------+
IPvX A--------->* *<---------IPvX B
| |
| |
------------------+------------+-----+----------+----------+----------+--
^ ^ ^ ^
| | | |
default rtr IPvX addresses ---> (IPvX A) (IPvX A) (IPvX A) (IPvX A)
| | | |
| | | |
IPvX H1->* IpvX H2->* IPxX H3->* IpvX H4->*
+--+--+ +--+--+ +--+--+ +--+--+
| H1 | | H2 | | H3 | | H4 |
+-----+ +-----+ +--+--+ +--+--+
Legend:
--+---+---+-- = Ethernet, Token Ring, or FDDI
H = Host computer
MR = Master Router
BR = Backup Router
* = IPvX Address, X is 4 everywhere in IPv4 case
X is 6 everywhere in IPv6 case
(IPvX) = default router for hosts
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