Re: Bits from Argentina, please review

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Emmanuel Arias wrote:
> Please, could you review it? Any comments, corrections etc. is welcome.
> 
> https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/bits/-/merge_requests/119/diffs

Comments and an attached diff.
 
  DebConf26 is already in the air in Argentina. DebConf in Argentina is giving us
  an opportunity to talk about Debian Argentina again. This is not the first time
 -that Debian came to Argentina, we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
 +that Debian has come to Argentina: we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.

(Aspect fix)
 
 -We happily received to Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera to visit the
 -venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we can
 -make some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
 +We happily welcomed Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera visiting the
 +venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we could
 +have some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:

I assume this is what it's trying to say; I'm not sure what "our first
stop" means here or exactly where the "can" comes into it.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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--- bits-from-argentina-august.md.orig	2025-09-07 18:34:25.217124446 +0100
+++ bits-from-argentina-august.md	2025-09-07 18:39:11.141283126 +0100
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
 
 DebConf26 is already in the air in Argentina. DebConf in Argentina is giving us
 an opportunity to talk about Debian Argentina again. This is not the first time
-that Debian came to Argentina, we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
+that Debian has come to Argentina: we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
 
-We happily received to Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera to visit the
-venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we can
-make some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
+We happily welcomed Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera visiting the
+venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we could
+have some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
 
 - ¿Qué es Debian? - Pablo Gonzalez (sultanovich) / Emmanuel Arias
 - [Cooperativismo y Software Libre](http://osiux.com/2022-10-20-howto-migrate-6300-hosts-to-gnu-linux-using-ansible-and-awx.html) - Osiux (gcoop)

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