Re: Possible suggestions to change sentences in the ftw-web.po-file.

On Sun, 30 Aug 2009 06:01:43 +0200
Kristoffer Grundström wrote:

Fixes inline


> *Congratulations, <br /><br /> Mandriva Linux is now successfuly
> installed on your system.* should be written *Congratulations,
> <br /><br /> Mandriva Linux is successfully installed.*
> 
> *Prev* should be written *Previous*.
> 
> *Go to: next step* should be written *Go to: Next step*.
> 
> *Go to: check my account* should be written *Go to: Check account*.
> 
> *we do not sell your personal informations to a third party.* should be
> written *We do not sell your personal information to any third party.*
> 
> *Please refer to our web site for our privacy policy.* should be
> written *Please
> refer to our website for our privacy policy*.
> 
> *Without this account, you may miss some of the benefits associated with
> your product.* should be written *Without this account, you may miss
> some of the benefits associated for your product*.

No, first is correct

> *You can always get back to this step, by selecting the registration
> wizard from the Mandriva Control Center.* should be written *You can
> always get back to this step, by selecting the registration-wizard in
> the Mandriva Control Center*.

Better would be: *You can return to this step, by selecting
the registration wizard from the Mandriva Control Center.* 

> *You are booting your new system for the first time*. should be written
> *You are now booting your new Mandriva Linux-system for the first time*.
> 
> *Thank you for checking your account in*. should be written *Thank you
> for checking your account*.

Is this from the Registration wizard? If so it would be better to say:
*Thank you for registering your account.*

> 
> *You may <a href=\"?act=survey\">continue on to our survey</a>* should be
> written *You may now <a href=\"?act=survey\">continue on to our
> survey</a>*.
> 
> *I have no account and I want to register*. should be written *I have no
> account and I want to register one*.

Better would be: *I do not have an account and I wish to register*.

> 
> *Your <strong>password</strong> must be at least %d caracters long.*
> should be written *Your <strong>password</strong> must be at least %d
> characters long.*
> 
> *Please provide your <strong>last name</strong>, at least %d caracters*.
> should be written *Please write your <strong>Surname</strong>, at least %
> d characters*.

Is this really "Surname"? The context suggests it should be "Username" ?

John

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