SF.net SVN: morphix: [2406] trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix. messages

Revision: 2406
          http://svn.sourceforge.net/morphix/?rev=2406&view=rev
Author:   paul_c
Date:     2006-09-01 13:57:51 -0700 (Fri, 01 Sep 2006)

Log Message:
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Proof read plus the addition of a comment.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix.messages

Modified: trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix.messages
===================================================================
--- trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix.messages	2006-09-01 20:46:58 UTC (rev 2405)
+++ trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix.messages	2006-09-01 20:57:51 UTC (rev 2406)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 #                                                         #
 ###########################################################
 #                                                         #
-# cvs version                                             #
+# svn version                                             #
 # $Id$ 
 #                                                         #
 ###########################################################
@@ -231,9 +231,10 @@
 MESSAGE_MORPHING_BOOT_MENU_2_2_1="Select Graphic to convert. 
 
 Please note complex graphics file may cause the message file
-to be too large. 
+to be too large. Keep it simple with minimal colours and
+patterns.
 
-This is a know bug to be fixed"
+This is a known bug to be fixed"
 ###########################################################
 MESSAGE_MORPHING_BOOT_MENU_3="
 We will now compile the new message file with the embedded graphic."
@@ -330,11 +331,11 @@
 
 The following will be saved
  - Any files and directories in the users home.
- - Hidden sitting files. 
-   - The are the files beginning with a . e.g. .icewm
+ - Hidden system files. 
+ - These are the files beginning with a . e.g. .icewm
 
 The following will not be saved
- - The X server setting - these are generated on boot up.
+ - The X server settings - these are generated on boot up.
 
 Lets start Morphing . . . ..."	
 ###########################################################
@@ -347,7 +348,7 @@
 
 This is really useful for setting default homepages, menus.
 
-The power of a mini-module is there are very simple to 
+The power of a mini-module is that they are very simple to 
 build, but really useful to change the whole impression of 
 the cd."
 ###########################################################
@@ -425,6 +426,7 @@
  * apt-get install new-application
  * Edit configuration files
  * Have fun ....
+ * Make toast...
 "
 ###########################################################
 MESSAGE_MAIN_MORPHING_3="
@@ -445,7 +447,7 @@
 We will now drop into at the chroot of the extracted 
 filesystem
 
-When finished with your morphing fun type:
+When finished with your morphing fun, type:
 exit
 "
 ###########################################################
@@ -532,7 +534,7 @@
 packages using chroot.
 
 Unless you one of the lucky people who has a local Debian
-repository you wil have to change repository setting. 
+repository you will have to change repository setting. 
 
 mmaker is in development. Your milage may vary lots!
 "


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