SF.net SVN: morphix: [2407] trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/ morphing-morphix-gui.sh

Revision: 2407
          http://svn.sourceforge.net/morphix/?rev=2407&view=rev
Author:   paul_c
Date:     2006-09-01 14:06:57 -0700 (Fri, 01 Sep 2006)

Log Message:
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Puff red and corrected grandma ;)

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix-gui.sh

Modified: trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix-gui.sh
===================================================================
--- trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix-gui.sh	2006-09-01 20:57:51 UTC (rev 2406)
+++ trunk/morph-scripts/mmorphix/morphing-morphix-gui.sh	2006-09-01 21:06:57 UTC (rev 2407)
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
 to start Morphing and to showcase of all the Morphix tools 
 - a LiveCD contruction kit. Just boot the CD and start 
 Morphing, no need to install tools, compile applications or
-switch operating systems. All is required is some space on 
-a connected hard drive. 
+switch operating systems. All that is required is some space
+on a connected hard drive. 
 
 On MorphingMorphix there are a number of interactive 
 HowTo/examples. The examples work best if you work though 
@@ -187,8 +187,8 @@
 Some of the examples, such such using mmaker and isomake 
 require access to the internet, so that software can be 
 downloaded from repositories to build new parts of a 
-MorphixCD. This. The examples are very machine intestive,
-using lots of disk space and bandwidth."
+MorphixCD. The examples are very machine intensive,
+using lots of disk space, memry, and bandwidth."
 ###########################################################
 MESSAGE_HELP_2="MorphingMorphix - Help & About 
 
@@ -198,11 +198,11 @@
 o /base - contains morphix, the module that 
           detects/configures your hardware and contains 
 	  your standard kernel modules.
-o /mainmod - contains mainmodules, these are also cloop 
+o /mainmod - contains mainmodules, these are also compressed
 	  images. MainModules contain your filesystem, 
 	  except for your kernel, loadable kernel modules,
 	  and hardware detection scripts.
-o /minimod - contains minimodules, again these are cloop
+o /minimod - contains minimodules, again these are compressed
 	  images. You don't need them, but you can add 
 	  extra functionality by including extra 
 	  minimodules. 
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
 
 Thanks to :-
  * Alextreme - our benevolent dictator
- * paul_c - British humor, grammer nazi.
+ * paul_c - British humor, proof reading.
  * gandalfar - for most of the code in MorphixLiveKiosk
  * Fellow morphers at #morphix
  * TROM (MichielioZ) for some of the ideas behind 
@@ -342,8 +342,8 @@
 
 The following will be saved
  - Any files and directories in /home/morph
- - Hidden sitting files. 
-   - The are the files beginning with a . e.g. .icewm
+ - Hidden system files. 
+   - These are the files beginning with a . e.g. .icewm
 
 The following will not be saved
  - The X server setting - these are generated on boot up."
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@
 home directory before continuing.This is really useful for 
 setting default homepages, menus etc.
 
-The power of a MiniModule is there are very simple to 
+The power of a MiniModule is that they are very simple to 
 build, but really useful to change the whole impression of 
 the cd."
 MESSAGE_MAKE_MINI_2="Saving files in /home/morph
@@ -387,10 +387,10 @@
 
 We will then use mmaker to build a new version of the 
 MainModule. Unless you one of the lucky people who has a 
-local Debian, you will be using the main Debian repository.
+local repository, you will be using the main Debian repository.
 
 You need a fast connection to Debian repository and a lot 
-of space to build the MainModuel before it is compressed. 
+of space to build the MainModule before it is compressed. 
 
 This step could take up to 45 minutes, but hey it is 
 automated!


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