Re: svn commit: r8569 - trunk/doc/book/book

"C. Michael Pilato" <[email protected]> 06 Feb 2004 07:45:44 -0600
Newsgroups gmane.comp.version-control.subversion.svn,gmane.mail.eyebrowse.devel
Message-ID <[email protected]>
[email protected] writes:

> +    <para>In February 2000, they contacted Karl Fogel, the author of a
> +      1999 book on CVS

How about, "the author of _Open Source Development with CVS_ (Coriolis,
1999)" (with the correct markup, of course).  The current phrasing is
both awkward and misses a chance to prop your work by name. :-)