Re: svn commit: r8569 - trunk/doc/book/book

[email protected] 06 Feb 2004 11:46:14 -0600

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"C. Michael Pilato" <[email protected]> writes:
> > +    <para>In February 2000, they contacted Karl Fogel, the author of a
> > +      1999 book on CVS
> 
> How about, "the author of _Open Source Development with CVS_ (Coriolis,
> 1999)" (with the correct markup, of course).  The current phrasing is
> both awkward and misses a chance to prop your work by name. :-)

Sure, done in r8574.