Re: [needs translation & proofread] December newsletter

Ana Galan <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.org.fsf.europe.translators
Message-ID <[email protected]>
As Richard pointed out (thanks!), I didnt update correctly the first 
paragprah.

it is now updated in the webpreview and in the html.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Best,

Ana

On 11/30/24 07:22, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote:
> I am sorry that I was not able to proofread this before it was sent to 
> the translators.
>
> I have not proofread this, but I want to send out a warning to the 
> translators.
>
> I started to make detailed suggestions about the first paragraph of 
> the newsletter:  "It's November and our team heads to Bolzano for 
> SFSCON, still thrilled by the inspiring 2024 Youth Hacking 4 Freedom 
> award ceremony! Last weeks we’ve also launched a new page to keep you 
> updated on the latest developments in our involvement with the Apple 
> vs. EC litigation. Find out the latest updates on Router Freedom, 
> REUSE and more!"
>
> I felt that the first sentence could use correction because it is out 
> of date.  I was working on the second sentence when I realized that 
> this paragraph is an exact copy of the first paragraph of the November 
> newsletter, as published!  (I had never seen the second sentence 
> before it was published, and that is why as I read it now I thought it 
> could be improved.)
>
> I am not attempting to write my own version of the first paragraph, 
> the summary of this month's newsletter.  But I suggest not translating 
> the first paragraph as Ana has sent it out, since I expect that she 
> will replace it.
>
>  I do expect to proofread the rest of this version of the newsletter, 
> but later this weekend, not now.
>
> On Fri, Nov 29, 2024 at 5:07 PM Ana Galan <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>     Dear all,
>
>     our December newsletter is ready for your proofread and translation.
>
>     https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1312
>
>     If all goes according to the plan, it will go out next Tuesday.
>
>     Best and thanks!
>
>     Ana
>
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