Re: [IT] Re: [needs proofread & translation] July newsletter

Thanks so much Luca,

with your revision the translation sounds good.

Thank you and bye,
Giacomo

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On Mon, 7 Jul 2025, 21:36 Luca Bonissi, <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hello Giacomo!
>
> On 04/07/25 16:41, Giacomo Alessandroni wrote:
> > PS You can find the translation also in https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/
> > fsfe.pl?pad=1494 <https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1494>
> > and... maybe I have worked in the English version. May you write to me
> > where I made a mistake?
>
> It was our mistake: we did not "lock" the pad, so it was accidentally
> edited by you...
>
> If the next time we forgot to do this, please press the button
> "TRANSLATE" button instead of "EDIT current review" button ;-)
>
>
> I moved the Italian translation to pad 1495, and make some update. You
> can see differences from the following link:
>
> https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1495&diff=2/1
>
> If you are not comfortable with updates, feel free to revert them to the
> original ones (press "Proofread/Translate" and the "Create new review")
>
> Following the prominent changes:
>
> 1) I translated "Digital Market Act", as in the Italian translation of
> the EU website you can read "Legge sui mercati digitali", and placed DMA
> and/or the extended English text where needed.
>
> 2) Maybe "sovranità" is not easy to understand in a "digital" context. I
> updated the term with "pieno controllo".
>
> 3) Usually I leave "Software Libero" with uppercase capitals, as in the
> English version.
>
> 4) I translated "Senior Policy Project Manager" with "responsabile
> senior di progetto delle politiche", but if you prefer we can also leave
> the untranslated version.
>
> 5) It sounds me a little bit strange the starting of the paragraph
> related to the newsletter "Saremmo lieti di ricevere tue notizie" (en:
> "We would love to hear from you").
> I replaced the sente with "Ci piacerebbe sapere cosa pensi!", as in some
> previous newsletter translations.
>
> Many thanks again!
>    Luca
>
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