[IT] Re: [needs proofread & translation] July newsletter

Luca Bonissi <[email protected]> Mon, 7 Jul 2025 21:36:35 +0200

Newsgroups	gmane.org.fsf.europe.translators
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Hello Giacomo!

On 04/07/25 16:41, Giacomo Alessandroni wrote:
> PS You can find the translation also in https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/ 
> fsfe.pl?pad=1494 <https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1494> 
> and... maybe I have worked in the English version. May you write to me 
> where I made a mistake?

It was our mistake: we did not "lock" the pad, so it was accidentally 
edited by you...

If the next time we forgot to do this, please press the button 
"TRANSLATE" button instead of "EDIT current review" button ;-)

I moved the Italian translation to pad 1495, and make some update. You 
can see differences from the following link:

https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1495&diff=2/1

If you are not comfortable with updates, feel free to revert them to the 
original ones (press "Proofread/Translate" and the "Create new review")

Following the prominent changes:

1) I translated "Digital Market Act", as in the Italian translation of 
the EU website you can read "Legge sui mercati digitali", and placed DMA 
and/or the extended English text where needed.

2) Maybe "sovranità" is not easy to understand in a "digital" context. I 
updated the term with "pieno controllo".

3) Usually I leave "Software Libero" with uppercase capitals, as in the 
English version.

4) I translated "Senior Policy Project Manager" with "responsabile 
senior di progetto delle politiche", but if you prefer we can also leave 
the untranslated version.

5) It sounds me a little bit strange the starting of the paragraph 
related to the newsletter "Saremmo lieti di ricevere tue notizie" (en: 
"We would love to hear from you").
I replaced the sente with "Ci piacerebbe sapere cosa pensi!", as in some 
previous newsletter translations.

Many thanks again!
   Luca

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