Re: [needs proofread] Legal corner - Apple notarization

Hi Richard,

Henning Lammert is our new intern. He is not a native speaker although I 
am sure he tried to proofread the Legal Corner news article thinking 
about giving you less work than more. I think he sent both the last 
xhtml and the webpreview versions. So if you didn´t started with my 
original source, you can just proofread the last version done by Henning.

I am also explaining him today how our translation process work so he is 
also aware of it.

Best regards and thanks a lot!

Ana

On 04/11/2025 17:19, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote:
> This is a "second hour" response to your last-minute request.
>
> You and I are lucky.  I have only limited plans for today, so that I 
> expect to be able to proofread this Legal Corner news article later 
> today and tonight, and have my suggestions in your hands by early 
> morning in Europe.
>
> We are also lucky in that I have glanced at the news article (reading 
> it on webpreview, but not yet proofreading it) and find that it is 
> remarkably well written.  So I do not expect to have as many 
> suggestions as usual to make when I do proofread it carefully.
>
> A third element of luck is that Henning Lammert has already proofread 
> the article and made numerous suggestions.  Thank you, Henning.
>
> This means, however, that I now have three versions of the news 
> article that I must deal with in my proofreading:  Ana's xhtml file, 
> Henning's later and presumably improved xhtml file, and the 
> webpreview.  The webpreview is the easiest to read, and I plan to do 
> my proofreading on it for that reason.  But it is inherently a moving 
> target, containing Ana's original source, Henning's suggestions, and 
> -- by the time I am reading it -- perhaps some still later thoughts.
>
> But I do plan to work on this later today and tonight.
>
> On Tue, Nov 4, 2025 at 9:04 AM Ana Galan <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>     Dear all,
>
>     we will publish tomorrow a new article of our Legal Corner. It is
>     a bit last minute but it would be great if we can have it proofread.
>
>     You can find it attached and here:
>     https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1549
>
>     Best and thanks a lot,
>
>     Ana
>
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