svn commit: r44963 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/geom-class

Author: bcr
Date: Mon May 26 18:28:36 2014
New Revision: 44963
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44963

Log:
  Remove e.g., as it is clear from context what is meant in this case.
  Capitalize titles and, as a side effect, spell GEOM consistently throughout
  the document.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/geom-class/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/geom-class/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/geom-class/article.xml	Mon May 26 17:43:18 2014	(r44962)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/geom-class/article.xml	Mon May 26 18:28:36 2014	(r44963)
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
       next best thing after a dedicated development machine).</para>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="prelim-system">
-      <title>Modifying a system for development</title>
+      <title>Modifying a System for Development</title>
 
       <para>For any kernel programming a kernel with
         <option>INVARIANTS</option> enabled is a must-have. So enter
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ dumpdir="/usr/core </programlisting>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="prelim-starting">
-      <title>Starting the project</title>
+      <title>Starting the Project</title>
 
       <para>For the purpose of creating a new GEOM class, an empty
         subdirectory has to be created under an arbitrary user-accessible
@@ -240,10 +240,10 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="kernelprog">
-    <title>On FreeBSD kernel programming</title>
+    <title>On FreeBSD Kernel Programming</title>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="kernelprog-memalloc">
-      <title>Memory allocation</title>
+      <title>Memory Allocation</title>
 
       <para>See &man.malloc.9;. Basic memory allocation is only
         slightly different than its userland equivalent. Most
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="kernelprog-lists">
-      <title>Lists and queues</title>
+      <title>Lists and Queues</title>
 
       <para>See &man.queue.3;. There are a LOT of cases when a list of
         things needs to be maintained. Fortunately, this data
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="geom">
-    <title>On GEOM programming</title>
+    <title>On GEOM Programming</title>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-ggate">
       <title>Ggate</title>
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-class">
-      <title>GEOM class</title>
+      <title>GEOM Class</title>
 
       <para>GEOM classes are transformations on the data. These transformations
         can be combined in a tree-like fashion. Instances of GEOM classes are
@@ -345,11 +345,11 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
       <itemizedlist>
 
         <listitem><para><function>.init</function> is called when GEOM
-          becomes aware of a GEOM class (e.g. when the kernel module
+          becomes aware of a GEOM class (when the kernel module
           gets loaded.)</para></listitem>
 
         <listitem><para><function>.fini</function> gets called when GEOM
-          abandons the class (e.g. when the module gets
+          abandons the class (when the module gets
           unloaded)</para></listitem>
 
         <listitem><para><function>.taste</function> is called next, once for
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-creating">
-      <title>Labeling/creating a geom</title>
+      <title>Labeling/creating a GEOM</title>
 
       <para>The sequence of events is:</para>
 
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-command">
-      <title>Geom command structure</title>
+      <title>GEOM Command Structure</title>
 
       <para>The helper <filename>geom_CLASSNAME.so</filename> library
         exports <varname remap="structname">class_commands</varname> structure,
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-threads">
-      <title>Geom threads</title>
+      <title>GEOM Threads</title>
 
       <para>There are three kernel threads created and run by the GEOM
       framework:</para>
@@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ KMOD=geom_journal
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="geom-kernelthreads">
-      <title>Kernel threads for use in geom code</title>
+      <title>Kernel Threads for Use in GEOM Code</title>
 
       <para>Kernel threads are created with &man.kthread.create.9;
         function, and they are sort of similar to userland threads in
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