git: dfdb2aff53 - main - status: 2023q1: corrections

The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=dfdb2aff5391fb10dd0690ada8cfc83264efb547

commit dfdb2aff5391fb10dd0690ada8cfc83264efb547
Author:     Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: 2023-04-25 17:22:54 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <[email protected]>
CommitDate: 2023-04-25 17:22:54 +0000

    status: 2023q1: corrections
    
    A commit for the introduction to the status report lacked a word that
    was added in Phabricator.
    
    https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/156
    (PR 156) for the Cluster Administrator Team report was mistakenly closed
    by me, without committing the report-related changes. Redo the missing
    changes (as PR 179).
    
    Approved by:  status (salvadore)
    Fixes:        8c929ddcf3 2023Q1/Status: Add intro.adoc
    Pull Request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/179
---
 .../content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/clusteradm.adoc | 12 ++++++------
 website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/intro.adoc  |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/clusteradm.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/clusteradm.adoc
index 24d4b1ae4a..f10cc05ff6 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/clusteradm.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/clusteradm.adoc
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ In this quarter, the team has worked on the following:
 * Regular disk and parts support (and replacement) for all physical hosts and mirrors.
 * Improve the PowerPC package builders.
 ** With new parts obtained through the FreeBSD Foundation, the builders now have new NVMEs with heatsinks and more memory.
-It helped seize the heat issue, and they are building packages faster now.
+It helped to solve the heat issue, and they are building packages faster now.
 * Decouple dynamic resources from the main websites.
 ** Work in coordination with doceng and webmaster to decouple dynamic resources from the websites, www.FreeBSD.org, and docs.FreeBSD.org.
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ It helped seize the heat issue, and they are building packages faster now.
 
 * Large-scale network upgrade at our primary site.
 ** New link:https://www.juniper.net/[Juniper] switches arrived at our primary site to replace the former ones.
-We thank link:https://www.juniper.net/[Juniper] for the donation.
+We thank Juniper for the donation.
 * Replace old servers in our primary site and a few mirrors.
 ** Besides the broken CI servers, we have a few old servers with broken disks and faulty PSUs.
 This task is in conjunction with the FreeBSD Foundation and donors/sponsors.
@@ -31,19 +31,19 @@ This task is in conjunction with the FreeBSD Foundation and donors/sponsors.
 
 ==== FreeBSD Official Mirrors Overview
 
-Current locations are Australia, Brazil, Germany, Japan (two full mirror sites), Malaysia, South Africa, Taiwan, United Kingdom (full mirror site), United States of America (California, New Jersey [the primary site], and Washington).
+Current locations are Australia, Brazil, Germany, Japan (two full mirror sites), Malaysia, South Africa, Taiwan, United Kingdom (full mirror site), United States of America -- California, New Jersey (primary site), and Washington.
 
 The hardware and network connection have been generously provided by:
 
 * https://www.bytemark.co.uk/[Bytemark Hosting]
-* https://www.bbtower.co.jp/[Cloud and SDN Laboratory at BroadBand Tower, Inc]
+* Cloud and SDN Laboratory at https://www.bbtower.co.jp/en/corporate/[BroadBand Tower, Inc]
 * https://www.cs.nycu.edu.tw/[Department of Computer Science, National Yang Ming Chiao Tung University]
 * https://deploy.equinix.com/[Equinix]
 * https://internet.asn.au/[Internet Association of Australia]
 * https://www.isc.org/[Internet Systems Consortium]
 * https://www.inx.net.za/[INX-ZA]
-* https://www.kddi-webcommunications.co.jp/[KDDI Web Communications Inc]
-* https://myren.net.my/[Malaysian Research & Education Network]
+* https://www.kddi-webcommunications.co.jp/english/[KDDI Web Communications Inc]
+* https://www.mohe.gov.my/en/services/research/myren[Malaysian Research & Education Network]
 * https://www.metapeer.com/[Metapeer]
 * https://www.nyi.net/[New York Internet]
 * https://nic.br/[NIC.br]
diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/intro.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/intro.adoc
index 42220a0265..1e233aca94 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/intro.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-01-2023-03/intro.adoc
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Here is the first status report of 2023, including 25 reports: we have our usual team reports, some news about cloud projects, progress in the src, ports and doc trees and more.
 
 We also provide some information about link:../../releases/13.2R/announce/[13.2-RELEASE], which was postponed to the beginning of 2023Q2; but since this report is being published after the new version release, it is already available for installation.
-Users of RELEASE versions can now take advantage of many improvements such as better support for man:iwlwifi[4] driver or the new man:rtw88[4] driver, topics that have been covered in past status reports.
+Users of RELEASE versions can now take advantage of many improvements such as better support for the man:iwlwifi[4] driver or the new man:rtw88[4] driver, topics that have been covered in past status reports.
 
 Have a nice read.