svn: /pear/peardoc/trunk/en/guide/users/ dependencytracking.xml

ashnazg                                  Thu, 10 Sep 2009 13:50:55 +0000

Revision: http://svn.php.net/viewvc?view=revision&revision=288240

Log:
minor clarity update

Changed paths:
    U   pear/peardoc/trunk/en/guide/users/dependencytracking.xml

Modified: pear/peardoc/trunk/en/guide/users/dependencytracking.xml
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--- pear/peardoc/trunk/en/guide/users/dependencytracking.xml	2009-09-10 13:23:36 UTC (rev 288239)
+++ pear/peardoc/trunk/en/guide/users/dependencytracking.xml	2009-09-10 13:50:55 UTC (rev 288240)
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
  <para>
   Another reason for using PEAR to track dependencies is to reduce the amount of
   work required when trying to do this work manually... checking to see if a new
-  release that may add required functionality, close security issues, or
-  include bug fixes can take time. Add a few more packages and interdependencies
+  release adds required functionality, closes security issues, or
+  includes bug fixes can take time. Add a few more packages and interdependencies
   to the mix, and the amount of work grows exponentially.
  </para>