Re: [PATCH 09/10] coresched: reduce excessive whitespace and verbosity in usage text
Benno Schulenberg <[email protected]>
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Op 03-04-2025 om 10:11 schreef Karel Zak:
> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 11:44:42AM +0200, Benno Schulenberg wrote:
>> - fputsln(_("Manage core scheduling cookies for tasks."), stdout);
>> + fputsln(_("Manage core-scheduling cookies for tasks."), stdout);
>> - fputsln(_(" get retrieve the core scheduling cookie of a PID"),
>> + fputsln(_(" get retrieve the core-scheduling cookie of a PID"), stdout);
> There is a comment from Thijs that kernel docs does not use hyphen, it
> means "core scheduling" rather than "core-scheduling". Maybe it would
> be better to follow kernel.
When speaking of the scheduling itself, it is indeed "core scheduling",
but when using this compound word as an adjective, then it is much
clearer to hyphenate it, to avoid the impression that it is talking
about a _core_, deep, central scheduling cookie.
> https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/hw-vuln/core-scheduling.html
In that first paragraph, I would write "Core-scheduling support...".
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/punctuation-capitalization/hyphen-with-compound-modifiers/
Benno
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