Re: booklet

Hi everybody,

I recently spend some time on the booklet.
Here is the result and the current situation :

- I added some "references" at the end of each part. I didn't include
websites that seems no longer active (Kopete's for example). Check here if I
forgot some important things or if I put some that could be removed in your
opinion.

- I wrote the last part ("KDE software in use"). Feel free to change
everything you want in that part. I really don't mind if everything goes in
the trash! This chapter was pretty cool to write, I learned many things
looking for information on the Internet. I also moved the paragraph
referring to Webkit in this part as it seems more accurate there to me.

- I integrate into the text the many relevant comments made by David, Irina
and *imag1narynumber*. However, I didn't integrate all of them : some are
quite subtle and require a higher level of English than mine to be treated
correctly.

- I added few screenshots (and removed some of them). I think there should
between 2 and 4 screenshots/images/photos per chapter. So there is still
work to do for the last chapters. Maybe, as these parts speak about the
community and people, it would be cool to add photos there (Akademy,
developers sprint, ...). If we only put screenshots of applications in the
booklet, readers will not see us as a community of people. If some of you
have great photos that could be put in the booklet, please add them.


Here is a list of main things that we don't speak about in the booklet and
that maybe need a discussion : Dolphin, Konqueror, KDE Finance apps, "join
the game".
In my view, Dolphin and Konqueror are the kind of applications that every
future user would expect to have, so I'm not sure it's worth talking about.
I know these are not common apps and that they have really innovative and
cool stuff but does it worth writing a part for it ? Maybe just report them
?
I think I will add a small paragraph in the "Create part" to highlight the
presence of the KDE Finance softwares.
About the "join the game" effort, I though of it recently but I'm not sure
the booklet will be handed to its target people.
What do you think about this?


The booklet begin to be pretty long, thus I have highlighted most changes
with an orange background. This way, you don't have to review the whole
document if you don't want so.

Some polishing and the final review will be coming soon :-)

Damien

 
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