Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 3:
OLD
Note that, a given vendor implementation may or may not permit the
abortion of
   the in-progress ISSU at particular stages.

NEW
Note that, a given vendor implementation may or may not permit halting
the in-progress ISSU at particular stages.

OLD
the test
   plan document should reflect these and other relevant details and
   SHOULD be written with close attention

NEW
the test
   plan document should reflect these and other relevant details and
   should be written with close attention