[manet] Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf- manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: (with COMMENT)

HI Éric,

Thanks for your review. Please see below

On Thu, Feb 6, 2025 at 4:22 AM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: No Objection
>
> ...
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> COMMENT:
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> # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08 CC @evyncke
>
> Thank you for the work put into this document.
>
> Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
> appreciated even if only for my own education).
>
> Special thanks to Ronald in 't Velt for the shepherd's detailed write-up
> including the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.
>
> Other thanks to Carlos Bernardos, the Internet directorate reviewer (at my
> request), please consider this int-dir review:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08-intdir-telechat-bernardos-2025-02-04/
> (and I have read Donald's reply)
>
> I hope that this review helps to improve the document,
>
> Regards,
>
> -éric
>
> ## COMMENTS (non-blocking)
>
> ### Section 1
>
> Should the 'unidirectional' nature of this I-D be reflected in the title ?
> Based on `This document defines a DLEP extension which provides an
> Ethernet-based flow control mechanism for traffic sent from a router to a modem`

It seems that logic would say that "unidirectional" should be added to
the titles of all four documents in this set. That seems like a
moderately big change at this point in the process so I am reluctant
to make it.

> Suggest introducing the "PCP" acronym when "Priority Code Points" first appears.

Ok.

Thanks,
Donald
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