Re: [proofread] [needs translation] May newsletter

Hi Richard,

thanks a lot! I dealt with those small changes.

Best,

Ana

On 5/7/25 17:42, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote:
> Thank you.  It is always pleasant to have one's questions answered.
>
> On Tue, May 6, 2025 at 3:12 AM Ana Galan <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Hi Richard,
>>
>> thanks a lot.
>>
>> To solve two of your questions:
>>
>> On 5/1/25 23:57, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote:
>>> 3.  Quote of the Month:  For some reason, in my version the
>>> attribution of the Quote of the Month omits the initial long dash.  I
>>> am not an xhtml expert, and cannot say what is causing this.  I have
>>> put in a crude version of the long dash into my version, but I hope
>>> that someone more knowledgeable will be able to see to it that the
>>> final version is better.
>>>
>> That is an html thing. As it is as a quote, there is a dash there
> I try to deal with html, but (to use an English colloquilism) html is
> not my thing.
>
> However, I do notice a typographical error that I did not pick up last week,
> and which has therefore persisted.  The Quote of the Month ends with a
> quotation mark but does not stop with one.  I am sorry that I did not notice
> this last week.
>
>>> 8.  The second and the short third paragraph under this heading should
>>> not be indented.  Indenting them under the LLW event makes them look
>>> as though they are part of that event.  I believe that this is
>>> incorrect, that these paragraphs describe a different " 'unperfect'
>>> discussion" from the discussions at the LLW.  (Although I was not able
>>> to view the recording, it would be very surprising if you were to
>>> publish a recording of a discussion at the LLW, since all such
>>> discussions take place under the Chatham House Rule.)
>> the video is from a different event, I think it was clear but as it was
>> not, I added a "moreover" at the beginning. I think this way it is a bit
>> clearer. Also, it has a different format to differentiate it.
> Adding "Moreover" is a big improvement, just what I thought was needed.
> Thank you.
>
> But here I see another typographical error, which I did not point out last
> week.  The last sentence in this section, "Watch the recording of the first
> event in this series, which took place on 3 April," lacks its final period
> (full stop).  I corrected this in the html version I sent, but I did not point
> out this correction, so it is only natural that my correction did not make
> its way into the published version.  Again my apologies.
>
> Clearly, I should have proofread a second time the newsletter draft that
>   I dealt with somewhat hurriedly last week.
>
>> Thanks a lot for your detailed proofread
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Ana
>>
>
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