Re: [needs proofread & IT translation] Refund4Freedom news item

"Dispositivi come laptop e smartphone": I would better write "Dispositivi
come PC portatili e smartphone" or even better "Dispositivi come PC
(portatili o meno) e smartphone" which in english would be "Devices like
PCs or laptops and smartphones".

Moreover I'd probably add an example because not everyone knows what a
software and an operating system is...
Something like: "You wouldn't accept a car with a guest inside, right?".

Finally, "start up the pc and take pictures", correctly translated in
"Avvia il PC e scatta delle foto" doesn't describe what to take pictures of.
I'd better write "start up the pc and take pictures or a video to document
your refusal of the proposed End User License Agreement", translated in
"Avvia il PC e scatta delle foto o fai dei video per documentare il tuo
rifiuto della licenza proposta (End User License Agreement)".

My 2 cents ;)
Have a good evening dearests.
---
Gabriele Ponzo


Il giorno lun 26 mag 2025 alle ore 18:15 Marta Andreoli <[email protected]> ha
scritto:

> Hi all,
>
> attached the text of the postcard translated in italian for you to
> proofread.
>
> Please do let me know if you have comments or make them in the file
>
> Thanks
>
> Marta
>
>
> Il 26/05/25 13:03, Dario Presutti ha scritto:
> > Hi all,
> >
> > On 26.05.25 12:17, Ana Galan wrote:
> >
> >> The IT translation is also ready for proofread:
> >> https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1464
> > Sorry, there was a misunderstanding between And and me. This is just
> > the automatic translation. I will follow-up on this list again with a
> > ready to be proofread version by EOB today.
> >
> > Best,
> > Dario
> >
> >
> >> Dear all,
> >>
> >> due to some issues with the webpreview, the English version is now
> >> here: https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1465
> >>
> >> We will need to add an extra paragraph so I will send you another
> >> mail later today with the xhtml update. That pad will also be updated
> >> later with the new paragraph
> >>
> >> (I just wanted to make sure you are not currently looking for it and
> >> you cannot find it)
> >>
> >> The IT translation is also ready for proofread:
> >> https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1464
> >>
> >> Best,
> >>
> >> Ana
> >>
> >>
> >> On 5/23/25 09:46, Ana Galan wrote:
> >>> Dear all,
> >>>
> >>> next week  (Thursday) we have the kick-off event of the initiative
> >>> Refund4Freedom and therefore, we wrote a news item about it.  I am
> >>> kindly asking for your help with English proofread and, as it is an
> >>> IT initiative, an IT translation.
> >>>
> >>> It would be great to have it done by next Tuesday evening.
> >>>
> >>> As usual, you can find the xhtml file attached and the English
> >>> version in the webpreview:
> >>> https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1463
> >>>
> >>> Thanks a lot and have a great weekend,
> >>>
> >>> Ana
> >>
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